pretty good
good for your first flash. it was kinda short though, and it sort of moved a little fast but other than that it was great!
Author Comments
This is just a short animation I made using the style of South Park! It is my first time using Flash, and I'm quite proud of the result! <3 Enjoy the flapping heads!!
The one in the green shirt is Chelsea, the tall one in blue & pink is Allison, and the one who looks like Kenny unhooded is named Keefe. Thanks to Krista, Kaitlin, Brandon, and Allison who let me animate them!!
The music I used is JET WORLD by Mitsuhiko Izumi from Guitar Freaks/Dance Dance Revolution.
(( Intro ?? ))
~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was good, very suthpark but i guess you knew that already, it was good though wit all sorts of characters, notbad at all, i liked it though, yu should make aseries, anyways nice job.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make a series of some sort.
~~OVERALL~~
Decent animation, kinda like southpart.
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Sweet!
WOW! That looks so cool! You can make a great flash! Make a bunch of Movies with them. It may becom a big hit!
This is pretty damn good for your first attempt!!!
Yeah, I like it.
Obviously is has similarities with South Park, but thats clearly what he was going for. People arent gonna have a go at all the Pico animations today because they have the same style as Pico, are they?
Anyway, fantastic if it really is your first go. I imagine you will be a fantastic animator in the years to come :D
Nahkoten responds:
Thank you >_< *hugs*
well unfortunately ...
the only reason i liked this is because it was like South Park and that project is simply genius. unfortunately yours is only a copy of it...albeit a good one..all the way down to the posters on the wall and the slogans placed in the background. anyhow..i think you should develop your own style...even if you have to take photos and do a 'south park' animation with them, make it your own. that will be better than emulating another style. your skill is good tho.
Nahkoten responds:
I understand where you're coming from about developing my own style, but I'm not exactly sure what you mean about taking photos to do a South Park animation?? Anyways, this is just for fun so I'm glad you thought I emulated the style well, because thats what I was going for this time around.