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(( Could be improved on ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ill admit this was funny, but could look better on visuals, also could be compressed, it is funny just needsmore effort on graphics and audio.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more effort all around.

~~OVERALL~~
Silly but needs work.

~X~

Pure unadulterated SHIT.

Whoa...this looks like something my sister might make...

Seriously, are trying to get turd of the week?

Okay, so the graphics weren't all bad, but the 'story' was incredibly sappy and retarded...

Unbelievable...

lpnmaster responds:

Thx... How old is your sister?

...

I died while watching your movie

While it is not an horrible, the movie isn't that great. The single biggest complaint I have is that it goes too slow. Really slow. US postal service slow. And some of the animation could be more fluid. Artwork is wonderful, and the story was interesting enough that I was willing to watch the whole thing. Oh look a chocolate horse.

lpnmaster responds:

Slow?

Buttons

When you make a button in flash, the fourth frame (labelled "hit" on the timeline) sets out the area within which the mouse will activate the button. Try drawing a larger shape in this frame; otherwise, buttons are annoying to activate.

lpnmaster responds:

ohhhhh.... thx :P

wow....

once again I wouldv'e gave you a 6 ...but I like the Irish music! eh work on the graphics and use movement like when he was about too kill the guy in the begining you should've had him actually raise his arm and kill him..Though if this is a first flash I could understand

lpnmaster responds:

i will learn how :P HAHAHAH

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Uploaded
Apr 29, 2006
12:44 PM EDT