Well after about 8 months (not to mention alot of trouble trying to upload this thing) its finally ready, music and all. Even though it has no dialog I think you should understand whats going on pretty well.
Special thanks to DJ Primo for the great music track, he really came through when nothing else quite fit. THANKS DUDE!!!
Please vote honestly and reveiw with something I can use (what I should keep, and what I should either ditch, or fix up and how) thank you very much
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Physics
You are in desperate need of some realistic movement in this flash. Study the way people and objects move in the real world, then reflect that in the physics of your animation - the acceleration of falling objects, splash effects, etc. People may not comment when the physics is good, but they'll still rate you higher because they'll believe in the animation more.
Let's see
The grpahics were okay. But in the start those space backgrounds looked awful.
The "Battle Scene" was really odd. Maybe you should try making it more fighting like.
I didn't catch any intrigue either. Well, if you are making second part maybe then..
Pfft!
Not exactly worthy of any praise, the concept it is based on is now a cleche, and no offense, but the drawing is based on crude geometric shapes. (and it shows that very well)
umm ok
Not my style but im sure lots of people like it
Good start.
Not too bad. Your animation has some way to go, but you have basically a neat little story that you can really go with. Some clarification of the characters and their backgrounds would be great for a sequel, if you're really set on making one.