(( LOL SHORT BUT FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny, way to short, but i did like it as it had some nice art with the wacky characters and the odd animation, it just sorta ended, you should add more to it though, because this has promise, anyways nice toon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer, Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny and wacky animation just abit short.

~X~

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:0!! Amazing ;]

An old joke

~The good~

Well... I guess you had music and the graphics were okay, they're not sticks at least. The voice over was clock style, which is better than no sound.

~The bad~

One bad thing: way too short. The soul purpose of this was to make a stupid joke that isn't funny and is pretty old. Also, the graphics were made of pretty much just a square head and differen, poorly made shapes for other body parts. The voiceover was practically not understandable without the subtitles, which happen to go away too fast before you can get the joke.

Overall, just a very, very bad flash. I hope my review was helpful.

1/5

omg

Horrible. The Graphics were okay, but here are some things you need to prove on with it.
1. Make it longer
2. Add better talking sounds.
3. Dont get so lazy.
4. have an explamnasion for how he got in that toilet.

stupid

a guys had spinning round in a toilet.right wots the point! when the credits were roling i thougt it was the beginning and that u were going have them then ,then at the end! personnaly i would like to know how he got in the toilet.