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The Living Legend

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This is my first flash submission. I just learn flash thanks to friend of mine.

This was inspired by anime films of the 80s and other shows such as Dragon Ball.

I know there is not much of a story more of just visual and animation. I am looking for reviews on this then I work on my next project with better story. Sorry my english is no good.

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good

good

Well drawn, but lacking elsewhere

Its nicely drawn but not animated to well, a bit on the choppy side. Try a higher frame rate with a bit smoother tweening for the next one. In regards to this being a first attempt its excellently done. More firsts flounder and fail, this certainly didnt.

(( DECENT FOR YOUR FIRST ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, and notbad work for your first maybe you should think about adding abit more detail to this, it would improve on this, nice work for your first though, hope to see many more animations from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some detail in the backrounds amd here and there will help.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and notbad for the first.

~X~

I like it Ja

Its your first one, according to you, so very well done, its better than alot of other first submissions, good thing it was saved from judgement eh, but yes, make more stuff, but try to make the foreground characters a bit more conspicous, make the background different from the characters colouring, or make the background a tad darker, just me opinion, still very good.

well um...

i dont get it...

but i do get the inyuasha song so 2 of my 5 b long 2 u.

Credits & Info

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3,606
Votes
29
Score
2.32 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 26, 2006
3:46 PM EDT