try making the voice in english and not have your animation wiggle so much but either way its 1 of the cutest things i have seen
man raar is so cute!!!!!!!!
if u make plushies of raar can u let me know!?!?!!?
lol i might even b ur first customer!
raar is sooooo adorable!!
Very Entertaining! :)
Graphics: (A+) I loved the Japanese (far east Asia in general) based artwork. The backgrounds and the line movement of the characters looked very good. I found that you chose just the right colors as well.
Style: (A+) I have never seen any other author make an animation like this one (except for you).
Sound: (A+) The narration was very unique. The music blended well into the scenes. Being in Japanese or Chinese or Korean (you get what I mean), I couldn't understand but it was very clear (I think) and you put a lot of effort into it. You told it like a story, and I could tell you put a lot of effort into it. The tone of voice you used seemed very calming, like you were trying to ask a angry person a sane question.
Violence: (n/a) I mean, come on. They are so cute.
Interactivity: (A) You can't put much interactivity in this but you did have a play button.
Humor: (A-) This wasn't a humor oriented animation but the fact that they had what was supposed to be the others (not trying to be a stereotypical person).
Overall: Raar and Ryk is a very entertaining piece of flash!
1. Have you ever thought about being an author for children's books?
1. a. This subject might go over their heads a little bit.
1. b. I agree with iDattebayo, smoking (even with a pipe) is probably not the best thing to put in a children's book or animation.
lol it's cute. Kind of slow, though.
I think it would be perfect for like a Japanese kids story or cartoon!
(Not including the smoking of the pipe.)
thanks, yeah I kniow it's sort of slow.
Who said anything about a pipe? It's a dragon chimney. Otherwise she'd start a lot of fires.
Aww! i love your style! It's THE best!
Don't EVER ever ever ever ever forget that i love dem!!