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The main person saying all the stuff is Jack Black.
lol

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Heh

Well the scenery could be better, with more detail and less plain colors, but other than that it's pretty funny, speech is definatly the best part in the animation, heh, looking forward to more of these, keep it up!

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So-so

^^Good Points^^
Not sure where you got the sound from, but I liked it. It was a tad bit humorous, but was pretty random (and not the funny kind of random).

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are very sloppy, they look like South Park, which in Flash movies means you are bad at animation. The part where the guy went to the kitchen was lame too... He kind of just sat on the side for a minute.

Okay....

Can be a whole lot better. Work on the sloppy animation and try something original instead of just a sound clip (if you already have, I'm sorry)
I give sound an 8 because I like that song at the end.

Hm

The southpark style almost worked maybe try and do some really fancy animation or something, the sounds was ok, violence was scetchy at best maybe animate the chops more, kinda funny though. Just work harder

definetely

It definitely has room for improvement, but on the other hand I somewhat enjoyed it. Also the South Park style, don't copy.

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Apr 25, 2006
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