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Seriously needs improvement, draw more, practice more, and spend more time on your projects next time.

Must be improved

I must say the only thing that interested me here was the story.

crap

that was bullshit.no story,awful graphics,and boring.and those robot guys reminded me of the boss in thing-thing 2.overall,it comes down to 1 word.................junk

Just sucked outright

Nothing was really done right. Sound was lame, graphics were garbage, it was completely pointless and made absolutely no sense. This looks like the work of a 13 year old boy going through puberty who got beat up for the past week after school.
Come back with a better product and maybe you'll get a better rating.
//Psychon

I bet you're patting yourself on the back.

It's not as stylistic and witty as you think. It's just unoriginal junk. Think of your own ideas.