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Monkeys and Watermelon

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Monkey gets watermelon and all other monkeys worship it. Then the savior comes and makes the one who carries the melon pay.

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IT SUCKS

IT SUCKS

im speechless....

Im sorry but, if this isnt your first time makling flash i must assume you are a total loser. this movie would be great if you improve it like 110%.
(at least you can make sprite movies... U_U)
anyway. the idea was........um....yea.....cool.
Graphics: its sprite! i love sprite!

Style: im sorry but i didnt saw any style at all

Sound:"i... tried to f*ck your mom in the ass....." man i need the name of this music.

Violence: there was no blood, the guy shooting was ridiculous. the only violence in this movie was on my ears due to the monkey screaming.

Interactivity: there was a play button...(i put this on every single movie that has only a play button) XD

Humor: due to the music at the end...by the way, if you meant to be funny at the "if u still watching this ur a perv" i must tell you you wasnt funny at all. im sorry.

Overwall: *read top*

Well, Hi!

I'm an angry critical and I say that this movie is crap, and ..

wa-wai--- wait a moment..

IS A COLLABORATION???!!

Well your on your way I guess.

But for someone called sprite monkey, your not very good with sprites. There was always this pausing in the thing and then when their going from one platform to another it doesn't look to good, no plot, horrible spriting, and the ending sucked. You just need some more practice and a good idea.

Thank you for raping my ear.

A note for entrepreneurial flash makers: if you're going to loop a sound file to play over and over again, please don't use the most annoying ear-hemmorage shrieking you can possibly find.

Also, helps if this sound doesn't completely interrupt the flow of the music you choose to start your flash animation with, unless it's an intended, or sought-after effect.

Lastly, it's generally useful if the plot you've selected doesn't come out of a drug induced coma or wasn't pulled out of an elderly chimpanzee's ass.

Having said that, I thought the monkeys were cute; and watching that one eat watermelon was strangely mesmerizing.

Collaboration responds:

Flash by Neuroshere: none

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Uploaded
Apr 23, 2006
11:29 AM EDT