Entertaining

Well this is pretty entertaining with some good points and not so good points i like the random humor and mixture of visuals here make more someday

~X~

Lucky him.

Unlucky us. You gave us a terrible flash to look at, you gave it to us looped and it was uncool all around. The graphics were good, but one frame of it really isn't something I can appreciate. Not a good submission.

Heh

If Zekeys in it, then it's all good, hehe. You could work a bit more on th scenery and shading, but otherwise it's a nice and entertaining short. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

short

it's way too short it needs a lot of lengthening but i dig the zekey/sevenstar graphics or is that jellyorools?

*shakes head*

^^Good Points^^
I will admit that the drawing wasn't bad. It looked quite nice.

^^Needs Improving^^
First off this is quite disgusting. It is just a crappy loop and has really no storyline or point to it. I didn't find this funny at all, and I know you can do much better.