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Naive (toast)

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just a SHORT revolving around a piece of toast and a stick like character, music by the kooks.

Did I mention that its SHORT, VERY VERY SHORT!!

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w00t

i loved it =D
well done.... and i liked the music lol



(( Interesting ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was interesting abit short and could use some backrounds but i had fun wathcing it, also could be abit longer and with more content.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more content and most of all add some backrounds.

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting abit dry but it was ok.

~X~



Not bad.

This "short" seemed to flow pretty damn good. Nice Job.



Not bad, but...

I think you've got potential there...
but you definitely need to work on those graphics...
they werent bad, but....
simple... oooh so simple...
simple isnt always bad, but that one crossed the line a bit too much.
I would suggest redoing it, using the stick guy as a help for putting something more defined in place.
Gogogo!!


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fireball-lock responds:

SIRYESSIR

(just call me Simon... simple Simon ;)


THat was pretty odd.

I sort of liked it until the end. "I have one dream - to acheive my many goals"? Ugh, what?


fireball-lock responds:

I had several seconds to kill... sorry =S

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2.84 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 21, 2006
11:12 AM EDT
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