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First pencil animation I did, summer program at SVA a looong time ago. Lot of fun.

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I'm so impressed that this was done with pencil. This looks amazing.

Damn...

So it really was pencil... The most amazing thing for me was that you could draw the charecters EXACTLY THE SAME every time. Simply awsome.

Wow...

I am amazed,

I really liked the amimation and the music (could be higher quality) and keep it up!

Very

Watched it through 3 times.

++++ I really like the look.

--- Though on the held frames where we're zooming in/out, it looks a little odd, how it suddenly becomes 'static'. Maybe you could have had a few frames repeating here just to keep the same look?

-- I think we should actually see the girl hand the flower over. That confused me on first watch.

+++ I love the way the foot-tapping is with the music's beat.

++++ Explosion is sumtuous, with the disintegration of the girl.

-- pre-loader could have been more in the style o the movie.

-- Maybe credits for the music.

overall
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Very cool graphics. Entertaining.

Totty responds:

Thanks man, this review is helpful. I'm making another film much in the same style currently and it's crits like this that make it much easier to learn from past mistakes!

thx agn

I liked it.

For a paper animation, that was really good. It had a really raw feel to it, and I find this at newgrounds very rarely. You have me impressed. I know you were rushed, and considering how much you were rushed, you still did an excellent job on this flash. Overall: Well done. I haven't seen a b/w film in a while that I enjoyed like this one. 4/5.

-Jose-

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Score
4.05 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 18, 2006
4:06 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental
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  • Daily 4th Place April 19, 2006