Eh. coulda been funnier
Well there was some stuff you could have added and the lack of charicter "Involvment" isnt that great the animation for the scean of the falling PSP "I think it was a psp" was great and it was clean humor with no unneccisary language. but for some feed back i would have like made the teachers breasts sag wayyyyy down and such
I loved it!
Nice clean and crisp style graphics wise, and a funny little script too. The voice acting seems a wee bit off though, comes off a bit stilted, but that's probably just me who thinks that.
could go far.
things to change:
lip sync: really pisses me off when u have to wait 10 seconds after something is said to see it being anamatied
wasnt 'funny': had a decent plot but never really had me laughing, make more jokes.
ok sound, not enthusiastic enough
make more or remake, good but could be great
Fuck that guy
Fuck that guy who said to give up, its actually pretty decent. Its a fairly original concept for a cartoon, but the problem is the cartoon itself isnt all taht funny. Try it again, but throw in some more jokes so that the viewer will feel happy with laughter at the end.
dont waste your time
dis was some bullshyt...