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improve the voice. more story is needed, better than many other movie in ng tough.

It was alright

It's OK, needs some work though. Probably going to get blammed because it's so short. Good job though. And good luck with your next submission.

Pretty Pointless.

You should have started this ages ago and maybe you might have thought of a better storyline.

Also the sound was terrible. Whoever was talking was too close to the mic and also sort out the sound difference between the music and the speaking.

On a replay of this movie I had to turn the volume down because the intro was too loud and then turn it back up because I couldn't hear what the kid was saying.

Pointless

I couldn't hear a single word the characters were saying, and the story , if you can call it such, was crap.

what the hek!

ok! that was weird for the dude hoe made this i culdint understand what the peopl were saing at all, sorry dude just wasint all that funny, it needs some work LOTS OF WORK!