Peoplace 2

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So this is the second one of the 3 part serries thing of Peoplace. Its abit short...really short, sorry. I never submited the 1st one(its on my site), but you'll pick up the story pritty easerly...i hope. yea its a bit basic. enjoy



This was interesting, the black and white was neat, and even the "TEXT" was a nice touch, the text was actually hard to read as it matched the backround abit, the animation itself actually moved abit slow, try and speed it up abit, anyways nice animation, keep up the good work...

Speed up the animation just abit... It was hard to read the text as it was a simular color to backround colors or just really light, what you could do is add a black bar behind the text so it is easier to read... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

Good b/w flash but could use abit more to it, overall i liked it...


On Fence

This is pretty anti-climactic. I'm not really expecting any hug surprise that was well-thought out because there really is no back story. That and everything goes so very slow that there is no real excitement.

Also, this should have been combined with your Episode 1 to make 1 larger Flash. The endings seem disjointed.

Good stuff

This flash trancends the usual submissions and is well done...but I can"t shake the feeling that it could have been much better with more thought.

Why didn't you submit the first one?

I don't think I'd have guessed this was a sequel to anything.
It was really short, I'd like to know what happens next!
The animation was smooth, though the walking was very slow, but it fitted in the story.
I liked the music, but there weren't any other sounds, were there?


Nice job. Animation is cool. Music isn't too over the top. Good job.

(I like the glare on the windows ^_~)

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3.31 / 5.00

Apr 13, 2006
12:22 PM EDT
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