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Some cool outfits...A nice song...i will add more stuff later..feel free to give me some ides on your reviews! thanks hope you enjoy it.
i loved the dress up .!!!
im only writing this reveiw because i accidentally pressed the useless button on blue plate speacials reveiw when i meant to press the one on mr boom stick reveiw cause hes such a dick so please forgive me and try to rate it helpful btw nise game.
Hot. Great graphics, good music, and a little clothes to move as well. Would be nice with more clothes though, and lighting details, but otherwise it's all perfect. Keep up the good work!
((( NOTBAD )))
Well notbad, but i find this to be very large in file, so you should think of somehow to compress it, as for the content well it was notbad decent style but i would suggest something more original and not something that the masses already do...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file...
Another dress-up game, this one is notba dthough...
All those who gave this a zero, READ...
To the people who give this and the fish game a zero, f**king grow up! Damn ya'll are harsh. Give the dude a break and offer some constructive criticism. If you actually READ THE F'N REVIEW ETIQUETTE it says that reviews are not the place to be an ass. If you didn't like it, say what you would change to make it better. How the f**k is he suppose to make quality work if you don't give him any advice. This is not just a place to show off your talent and get people to view your work, but also a place to improve your work. I mean, damn, no one started out a genius in flash making 5/5 games/movies. We all have to start somewhere!
Look, steven, don't listen to those assholes. I personally think your work is not that bad. I mean, it's a good bit rough around the edges (i.e. definitely needs some work) but you have talent. Don't give up.
Here is some criticism I can offer you for both your games:
1. Dress the Hottie: it wasn't bad. The thing is, however, that if you are going to make a dress-up game, it has to have some new. It needs to have something no one has thought of before. See, with games like dress-up and move the mouse around the maze, they have all been done so much that people are more willing to give them a bad score if they don't see anything new and surprising. It was a damn good attempt, but it's just missing that extra bit of creativity.
2. Top Fish: I reviewed this before and I like the changes you made, but two things bother me. One is the movement, it makes the game a little too easy. Maybe bring back a little bit of sliding (in other words, when you let go of the arrow, the fish doesn't stop right away). Also the score, it's a little hard to read. Choose a different font. The game, I will admit, is a lot better. I gave you a good score to try and help you out.
Final note: I think the best advice I can give would be for you to be original. I like your games, but you just need that little bit extra that you don't find in other games. That will help you stand out and people will respect you a lot more for showing them something new.
thank you so much dude..i have already taking your advice into consideration..i agree with you that my games are o.k but not at all original..and i have already started making a game totaly my own idea.. i hope it does well .thanks again mate:)
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