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Eric and Jordan Ep 1

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Eric and Jordan travel to the movie theater, where they meet some new friends. See how this comical adventure plays out, and play the game at ericandjordan.com, where more episodes will eventually appear.

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well

the voices where nicely done, and the animation was pretty nice, though you could have had multiple head angles, so you dont have to flip them.
it was long, so i give you credit there, because it seems you put time into it. but most longer movies on NG these days are series like this, with no amazing art work, so it gets hard to watch. at first i thought it would just be one of those normal little series that 12 year olds try to make about 2 friends who do absolutly nothing, you know? while the voices where childish with the main characters (by that i mean it sound like your a young kid) they where still good and lip synched well. You could improve the way your characters are put together, because alot of times you can see where they fall apart and the lines dont connect.
present yourself better, but not so much that it makes you look like a douche bag that thinks theyre all that already. what i mean is, make your loading screen flashier and with more colors and different fonts and designs, but dont make it have some sort of "official logo" followed by "-your name- PRODUCTIONS" because it puts people off when you havnt accomplished much in publicity for your movies, and flash greats REALLY cant stand it.
anyways, i hope this review helped a bit.
next time, work on the art a little more. and was jordan like a monkey or somthing? with those HUGE ears??

keep it up

thestupidinator responds:

We really appreciate this review, and will certainly take it into account. Don't forget to play the game based on this episode on ericandjordan.com !

nice work for an opener

you animated nicely and did a good job on the voices. jokes were a bit one line ish felt like you were trying to copy either bonus stage or decline of video gaming.

graphics and style. your charictors did move around some where they weren't in the same locations you didn't have any of them move in a scene except the cow. there were a 2 other people in the theater moving but it was empty for the 4.

sound. some of the better voice recordings i'm probly knocking the score down since i didn't like the pace of the entire flash.

violence. minor domestic stuff 3

interactivity the buttons in the corner. play

humour. the jokes just weren't all hitting the right spot, points for effert and the pic of the guys head in the knight costume.

thestupidinator responds:

Thanks for the advice, praise, and constructive criticism. Remember to visit Ericandjordan.com and play the game based on this episode!

what was up with that intro...

it was way too long and unnecessary for the moive...

once the movie started it was aight...jokes were stale and not a whole lot was going on...you need better writing...

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Apr 10, 2006
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