the voices where nicely done, and the animation was pretty nice, though you could have had multiple head angles, so you dont have to flip them.
it was long, so i give you credit there, because it seems you put time into it. but most longer movies on NG these days are series like this, with no amazing art work, so it gets hard to watch. at first i thought it would just be one of those normal little series that 12 year olds try to make about 2 friends who do absolutly nothing, you know? while the voices where childish with the main characters (by that i mean it sound like your a young kid) they where still good and lip synched well. You could improve the way your characters are put together, because alot of times you can see where they fall apart and the lines dont connect.
present yourself better, but not so much that it makes you look like a douche bag that thinks theyre all that already. what i mean is, make your loading screen flashier and with more colors and different fonts and designs, but dont make it have some sort of "official logo" followed by "-your name- PRODUCTIONS" because it puts people off when you havnt accomplished much in publicity for your movies, and flash greats REALLY cant stand it.
anyways, i hope this review helped a bit.
next time, work on the art a little more. and was jordan like a monkey or somthing? with those HUGE ears??
keep it up