I managed to see the original of this one on Putfile, and I can see the differences in here. Some of the timing is off, but it's still good!
The artwork is very simple, crude stick figures and a sort of unfinished look to near everything else. But that's not a big deal, the things that turn this movie around are the incredibly fluid animation and above all else, the very funny humor. It's a short little episode, helping to build-up a character that could be a fun series headliner. The audio was pretty good, I liked the voice, and some of the sound effects. With some improvement, who knows what could happen.
YOU STOLE THAT JOKE!
atliest i bet
well the idea of trying to kill yourself and then immediately going to watch tv losing iterest i kinda took from JTHM (the early artwork in the full book) but the hammer falling out of the gun and gods intervention is all me.
great story. awful graphics.
I would have liked this so much more if you had just gotten someone else to do your graphics or taken just a bit more time with the layout. Your storyboard was great, but the graphics were so bad they were distracting. What was with the buildings moving when he was looking out the window?
Points go for humour, story, effort.. but it's visually off-putting.
It had me laughing. Especially the note from God...
Though I'm sure he knows "Deus Ex Machina" != God Machine. It means God -from the- Machine, translated literally.