Hmm. Your getting better!
Pretty good, but, you misspelled a couple things, but ill let that slip, the music hurt my dogs ears when I played it (but thats okay, i LIKE watching my dogs go crazy) Overall, you did pretty good!
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This is a Re-Release, I know I released the second one yesterday BUT I had already had that finished for 2 days and started work on this re-release since. This is basically part 1 and 2 put together. YES THIS HAS MORE SCENES, About 3 More, Along with additional parts in some scenes. I just felt releasing it with both parts together is what I should have done in the first place just now I added more Scenes and stuff. So ENJOY!
it was nothing special...
uhhm all i can say is that u need to spell things better and use better gramar, i caught like 20 mistakes and i wasnt even giving it all of my attention.....
get an editor or somthing...
Nice Music, that is, if it really is original..
DanmyMan responds:
No all that music is all original. I know the guy who made all the music in real life. And I made some my self. Also, you spelt grammar with 1 M, Also I didn't think I had to many mistakes...
Anyways other then that thank you.
Hmmm...
Ah! Pop ups should only be used for a meaningful purpose (take exmortis2), and these seemed pathetic. Anyway, the flash was alright and you may be able to pull something next time if you can think of a decent storyline, possibly tied to this story.
Has potential as an idea.
Interestingly creepy little piece with a good storyline. As the previous reviewer stated, the graphics could use a little work, but that may simply be part of your particular style. Seems almost unfinished, though.
meh
The lack of any voice over narration made it pretty fucking boring. I guess it has potential... "I guess." I don't really care enough about it, though, so whatever.
Cheezy graphics, too. Put more time into it. But as I said, I don't really care. Heh.
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