You're on the right track

But NG is no place for half finished flashes, or unfinished intros. You can put a flash into .swf format you want to test it, but dont submit teasers.

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~~REVIEW~~
Well eventhough it is an intro it was ok still too short, needs more scenes and more ships, also it seemed abit laggy, maybe due to the 3d like style, but it was not a bad intro, hope to see more on it soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content more scenes and more ships...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short intro too short if you ask me...

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Makes me Want to see more.

It is definitly just an intro, haha. It looks good so far though. Just add some sound and continue the story, it should be awesome!

not bad

it was an alright animation, but pretty short and it really could've used some audio.

Definitely has potential.

I think you've definitely got potential. Just throw in actual sound, some characters and a storyline. You've already got an eye for details on graphics, which is awesome and NOT SOMETHING WE SEE ENOUGH OF ON NEWGROUNDS. Keep it up, your work could be phenominal.