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I worked really hard for this 'short' trailer,
Mr.Jack (based on System of a Down's song :P)
Hope u ppl like it.
SYSTEM OF A DOWN!!!!
i'll definetly look out for the next one, man oh man, but yea you should maybe put voices in, if you need voice actors, me and my friends would help out contact windtunnelarchives at hotmail
((( ABIT SHORT )))
This was notbad but for a "TRAILER" it was a tad short, might want to add more to it and more info on what to expect, but as for the artwork notbad a touch of detail would help though, anyways nice work keep it up...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well to be a good trailer it needs to have more detail and more info on the full version, while its a trailer it should be short but still give enough scenes, story plot, and characters info and give the viewers something to want to look forward to the full version, also mak ethe text larger...
Abit short and needs more info to it...
Not being funny matey. Very good and looks ACE! and I bet its going to be wicked if the triler is anything to go by...
But it needs voices that think at the bottom to read isnt very good make sure the full movie has voices mate!
Other than that VERY GOOD!
It was good
I know this was a trailor, but the animation was good. The whole spinning gun thing was wonky but other then that, it was good. I like that SoaD song btw ;)
Seems like you got something here. Keep it up.
Yes I am a avid SOAD fan and I love that song but so far just by seeing this "trailer" It looks like it has nothing to do with the actual song. Because the song is thought to be most likely about a drug dealer who is fleeing from the police and gets pulled over in a car on the side of the freeway. Going by the songs text "Put your hands up get out of the car!" It already seems that Mr. Jack is in a car and being arrested. But if in later trailers you prove that your story is what the song sings abotu and this is just a before the car part then I will apologize for doubting you.
Also dont steal madness characters just make up some of your own
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