Loads of potential!
Graphics: Backgrounds are very pleasing to the eye...could use a background of total grass or just tiles of a kitchen! Everything could use alil more graphics...i didn't know what that white thing was...a maget or a tell peice of ashes?
Style: This is definatly unique, and it clicks as your own!
Sound: I seem to repeat myself the most on this...needs background music...the flash portal is there to help out with music! (I would like to see a music video based on the audio portal) But voices is a good idea.
Violence: Everything had red blood, and there is suggestive stabbing!
Humor; HAHAHA the fly swatter was bleeding!
Overall: How much I personally enjoyed it! I love to see story lines in flashes, it really shows creativity! Keep it up, I am kinda looking forward to the next ep.