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EDIT: ok i know it sucks and its been months sinc ive submited anything and thats beacuse ive been workin on my skills and stuff. lz stop review badly...
Love it. Great scenery, simple graphics, smooth animation and a comical concept as well. It's a bit short and without real storyline, but keep workin on it! Audio could be optimized too. Keep it up!
nice sounds and nice backgrounds. you also put thought into your flash and added a story to it.
the animations were pretty dull and the story was really confusing.
umm, try to be more clear with your story, so that one could understand what's going on. and try to improve on your drawing and animation skills.
other than that: good try!
you gave it a good go and thats all that counts
What is going on? Maybe if your flash looked better it could afford to stray from the story. I didnt have a clue of what was going on through out the flash although I think you at least tryed to give us a good story. This is a good base to improve upon so good luck with part two.
What on earth was this?
This has got to one of the wierdest, most Fuk'd up flashes I have ever seen. First, it looks like you stole copyrighted video game images and put half-ass cartoon stick people on top of it, and they aren't even the same style. I could not follow the story (if there was one) at all. Also, if ur gonna steal pictures, steal them from the same game. It went from decent graphics, to 32-bit, to something wierd, back to decent. Please spend some time on your flashes. It looks like you made this last night. If you don't take any classes, atleast take the tutorials given in the Flash program of online.
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