I understand its a trailer, but...
..its still not very good; short, storyless and pretty much actionless, it was pointless :P next time make it more exiting and bloody or however youre hoping to make the game
man, not great
if wasnt great. might make a good game with a little work but im not likin it. i look forward to it as a game with some script and maybe another few mins added on though
kinda short but it has a LOT of potential as a game. also, you might want a less deceptive title. i'm gonna go out on a limb here and consider it a teaser.
Man it would be cool if you made this into a game cuz this looked realy nice.
Considering that this is your first movie, and you have already done this - I can only imagine with some more time and expierence what you will be able to do. While the artwork is not all that great for the majority of the film, I was pleasently surprised at how nice the motions were. The most interesting part was in the end with the replay section and the close-up shot of the character. I liked the movements and it seemed pretty good. In future work, I would like to see more on an emphasis on the plot and a reasoning for the actions of the characters. Not that bad, good luck.
thanks for the constructiveness of ytour criticism!