Very good!
I like it! The script is very unique, as well as the character. The volume of the voices was a bit low but the movie was still nicely done! Good job! Keep em comin!
~Jay-B
Author Comments
Well, here it is, my first flash.. Most of this was just an
experiment with different flash techniques, and learning the tricks of the trade. Don't be too harsh! \\O.o//
Hope you like it
-Mauwzaa
A brief intro to a very odd villain in a new series underway.
TumbleWeedPro
Thats was, different. But in a totally awsome way. The animation style was a bit slow, and the graphics could have used a bit of touch up. But I loved the script, dialogue, whole nine yards. Great job, Keep up the good work.
5/5
GravitasLost responds:
Thank you so much for the review!!
Next one will be faster, and hopefully
the art will be better.
And stay tuned for the next one!
I bet you had fun making this
cuz I had a lot of fun watching this. You have found the fine art of sound manipulation that has been lost all these years with the distortion and the stereo effect as well. I love some of the dialogue especially, "I only work on Tuesdaaaaaaaaaay...." It's like he's even confusing himself.
GravitasLost responds:
Hahahah yeah it was truly fun! Finally an excuse to have stereo voice clips in a flash!
Unfortunately my trial version of
Adobe Audition has run out, so I'll have to improvise in Audacity for the
next one. Actually the sounds the green clock makes are all done with my voice, and sound processed in Audacity.
Hahaha. The gardener is a little brainwashed. Stay tuned for the back story for this!!
Slow ... so ... slow
We must cut. We must kill. We must trim. We must eliminate. We must...
Basically this was a slow, dragged out, repetitive animation. You could have gotten everything across in 20 seconds but instead it seemed to be 10 times that. Make it faster-paced. Cut down (excuse the pun) on the useless lines and you'll have something worth watching.
GravitasLost responds:
Thanks for the review!
I see what your saying.. but.. the lines.. while they may seem jumbled now, are actually laying out a riddle for future episodes.. stay tuned!
What?
OK, that was cool. But I didn't get it. Is the guy supposed to seem good or evil?
GravitasLost responds:
Muhahahahah If you don't know... then I have achieved my goal indeed!!
The Gardener has a very unusual goal
that can not be considered truly good or bad!! Stay tuned!
