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This is not my work this is my girlfriend's flash... She did this after one week with flash, pretty impressive if u ask me... thanks for watching

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That was Matt, from Digimon!

Three words: I LOVE THIS!

Jeez

It was great! She had to have practiced like 10 hours a day, if not then your girlfriend is gifted. Seriously.

pretty good, but . . .

was that Matt from Digimon? That was a surprise.

I liked it

I enjoyed this piece. It was full of effort from your girlfriend. She still has a LOT to learn, mainly directing with flash, so that she can plan her movie around what is easily possible and effective, rather than what is effective from a cinimatic piece.

Some things to improve on:
- Sound effects, this had none :(
- Shading, i saw little in the background
- Perspective backgrounds (re-look at flash perspective tutorials to see how it's done, the one with the back-alleys we're lacking a point of focus, making it look wrong).
- Easing (of motion tweens) for the violin at the begining.
- Gradients and shapetweening, for the sun in the background, the use of exterior images made me cringe.

Tell her to keep practicing, you need quite a bit to get decent with flash, i've been doing it for a year now...

- James

Niiiicceee...

Nice work your gf did man! Excellent artwork. Although the animation was a little less detailed. Like the guy would squeeze while goin throught the doors and stuff like that. That looks unnatural. But overall, a great flash...

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Uploaded
Apr 2, 2006
12:06 AM EST