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Nim moves to College

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Well anyways Ive been working all day on this..and since this is going to be the begining of the episode id like to know what you all think of it so far..before I spend another week on it or so.

if you have any idea's on what to add or change or if you want to help with this new series you can just message me here or on my website.

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Hmm

Needs work. I like the graphics of the cat and other characters but the picture stuff was alittle crap with the animation. I don't kno what you can do about that. Sound was very low couldn't really hear them well but I'm glad you included subtitles.



I didn't like the graphics

Your characters where well drawn but you really shouldn't have put a picture of a real-life car, I could see the white outline; they looked weird.
anyway, i see you have some skill, you could do much better, you should also work on your story line.



The sound

I didn't like the voices. I could barely hear them and they were unclear. I can see this being funny. The idea is dark, and I like that. Most people on newgrounds would probably appreciate more dark humor. You probably need to review the word choices you made, possibly find a little bit more of a direct way to say what you're getting at. Maybe find a few words that are a little darker or a bit more twisted.
Hmmm, it all really depends on what you're aiming for. All in all I think you've done a pretty good job thus far.



nim....

bit map trace work was not to bad, is there going to be a continuation of the story line, cause he did not quite make it to College, the plot could be a little stronger.

just keep trying.



that's funny!

First off, I loved it, it had a really funny ending. The graphics were crude but effective and the plot was really short, but other than that it was great.


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Apr 1, 2006
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