good, not bad so far.

little rusty here and there,other than that, it was good.

Good Effort

Again Good Effort but you should add more animations and mabey make the next one longer

i have to say thoe i do look forward to the rest of them

ps i would make the font a little bigger next time 'round

Not A Bad Effort

This wasn't a bad flash, although it did need some improvement. The audio was, for the most part, fine, but in the scene right after Bowser was released, you needed more dramatic, darker music. What you used, at least to me, didn't quite fit in with what the mood should have been. Next, the dialogue balloons don't need to hold the arrows to the next line of dialogue. You should put one button somewhere on the bottom, some what out of the way, so the viewer isn't constantly clicking all over the animation. Also, the dialogue itself seemed a little trite to me, and it seemed that maybe a lot, if not most or all, of it was thought up as you went along. A little more planning might be needed for the next one. It was a decent start for this series, and not a bad storyline along with it.

my head herts from the music

next time make a mute butten.

:3

It cracked me up when Yoshi got high! xD Teehee!
Well, this wasn't bad. Rough around the edges, but not that bad.