I just wanted to make something that parodied cartoons where everyone bursts into song, you know, the type of feature cartoons you watched as a kid. It was kinda fun making it.
FlakeyWaffle
hey, that was pretty good!
you managed in some ways to capture the "feel" of one of those old-school animated musicals, albeit on a much smaller time-frame. great job with the animation and voice-acting. sure, some things could have used some work, but overall it was enjoyable. you should continue animating. you could do some great things!
one word... great
There were a lot of things about this I liked... such as the gerbil/hamster thing with the shotgun... the missile launching eagle... etc
Keep up the good work... dotdotdot
So great!
This is great. The only flaw is the rabbit's tacky body structure. otherwise it was perfect!!!
long periods of being dull
-- Kinda slow in places
- The ending's hard to follow... so the rabbit had just been telling the fox about his daydream? You could've introduced that more graciously.
--- It's all kinda predictable.
--- There could be a lot more silly stuff going on during the songs to elevate them above the status of poor copies of poor material.
++ Some nice graphics.
++ The missiles being dropped by the bird made me chuckle slightly.
++ Nice voices.
overall
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I didn't much care for it. A slight chuckle, a couple of smiles, but long periods of being dull.
The voice-acting and some nice animation shows talent, but I didn't much care for the writing.
Ew.
Even though you're making fun of toons where everyone bursts into song for no reason, that really sucked.
