Seek Help, immediately.

I dunno, you just didn't come across with any real sense of despair or generate sympathy for the character. Ergo, who cares?

Second, the movement need help, unless he really did have hoofs.

You need to add something to make the short piece work. Otherwise it seems like you are just seeking attention, and maybe you should -- if that's the case.

Try again.

Blaze

What the eff?

The style was all right and I liked the guy and his shaggy hair... but gimme a break. He hated someone else so he blows his cartoony brains out? And you get to watch him bleed? What the eff is the point of that? Ya get 10 for violence and 0 for effort. Make me proud.

this stunk

this confused me
it looked like it was going to attempt a point or moral lesson,
but in the end the guy/girl or whatever it is killed itself.
next time try to make a more ambitious work of art rather than a ridiculously violent cartoon about suicide. because nobody likes an emo

Promising

I dig the art style and your ability to establish mood in a direct and simple way. The walk cycle needs work and you could have expanded on the story a bit. You've got talent. I wish you the best of luck on your next project

good idea

expand the idea sharpen up the graphics and make some more interesting music and it will pass easy.