Not Even A Nice Try.
Maybe you're new at this, but regardless, this was a horrible flash. The animation, the voice acting, just everything was wrong. You need a lot more practice in order to get good at flash animation. And it seemed you were going for humor in this, but it just wasn't funny at all. It all just seemed too scripted, and not very well-written. If you were the one who wrote this out, you might want to rethink your next project. After some practice, you could be a good flash artist, but if you want to have voices and a good story, honestly, I would try to enlist some help from someone who maybe has some experience with this sort of thing, and have them work with you on your next project.
