Ow My God MAN!!1
Man this flash rocks nice anemation you are making dude cant wait next part i am waiting All MY FIVE BELONG TO THIS !!!
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Well It's finally here. I had computer problems for a long time but now its complete. In this episode our hero encounters a ninja like thing with a red bandana. Fear the bandana!
OrigamiNugget responds:
Thanks! I appreciate all your five.
great!
This was a great movie but im having trouble doing aome of the animation. I was thinking that ude do frame bu frame but then i had shown my father and he said it was frame by freame by frame aswell.. i have drew all the wepons and the chaictars, i just need a little help on the animation... did u use frame by frame, how did you do the shadow of the wepon from whence he swooped it... i would love to make a parody... i just need a few tips... like how u made all the people on the screen use ther wepons at the same time, i give this movie 10 out of 10 and its soo good i would love to make a parody i just need some help with the animation and the shadows of the wepons and mabie some back grounds
thanks..
kalius (im the brother of medinus)
OrigamiNugget responds:
Heres a couple of tricks I use. Each enemy and the Hero has thier own Layer. The weapons are in the hands as objects. I'd love to send you the file with the weapons and graphics if you want to make a tribute. Oh, and the shadows are when a weapon moves from one spot to another very fast, the shadow is from the start to end. If u need to get at me, ask me in another review or something like that :) Thanks for the 10!
Nicely done, though not my thing mebbe.
how I played this
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selected aspects (rated from ----- to +++++)
(note: I'm not rating everything or trying to break the flash up into constituent parts. Just indicating how much each adds to/detracts from my enjoyment of this.)
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+++: lots of fast action.
++: Fairly short - not artificially lengthened.
++: humour of screaming dude.
-: 'balls' aren't very expressive. It'd be nice if they had faces, or if their eyes changed for expressions. Maybe zoom in a bit into the characters. Let us see them surprised or angry or frightened or whatever.
--: Background/grassy landscape looks a bit lousy. Spend more time on that, seeing as we're gonna be seeing it for quite a while.
+: The lava part looks fairly nice though.
+: I kinda like the way that blue 'defeated' red.
overall
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A cool movie. Way better than I expected from the starting few seconds.
I'm not too keen on these 'minimalist killfests' though. I'd like some story, expressive characters, motives...
But I respect what you've done here.
Keep at it. Keep improving.
Stay funky,
- Bez
OrigamiNugget responds:
Thats a great idea. I'll try my best to incorporate emotions into the caharacters faces. But if you read my previous reviews you would have learned that I made a full lenght cartoon of this style with hair, faces, and backgrounds and everything but it failed miserably. I keep getting better though. I'm not sure how to thank a person for giving me the lowest review score yet, but thanks for the constructive criticism and insight.
sweet
Great Job This reminds me of early madness you are going to have a great series under your belt if you keep up the action and quality.
OrigamiNugget responds:
Thanks a lot. I'll keep making them if these reviews stay so posotive. The next will of course be better. Thanks again!
fun...talented
cool
OrigamiNugget responds:
Thanks for the 7!