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-SFS 1-

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***IN THE GREEN!*** TY GUYS!***
A short stick fight (SSF) 1... made it in a couple of hours so I hope you like it... Enjoi.

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:)~nice

prety gooooood a lil short thoooo

Woo!

So this is the great episode where it all started, heh, nice and simple FBF animation. Neat and stylish. Keep up the good work!

-cd-

WOW

its a good submission with good a fighting style, Remindes me of a anime movie i saw

Totally right. do more stuff like this!!!

You win, your right, SFS 1 is teh awesome jointless stick fightness. I <3

slowz responds:

ty.

Hmm...

Better than SFS 2, the action was a smoother, and had sound.

Some tips for improvement: Color/detail the background, overall its a little bit of work, but a big improvement.
Speed up the pace of the action. It picks up at about the middle, then pauses. A slow beginning is fine, the climax is supposed to be the most enjoyable, so maybe taking down a guy every two seconds would be a good speed.
Finally, some VARIETY, throw in some different weapons. A bat, a sword, maybe some guns, a rocket launcher, hey maybe a tank or a plane. (Shoot the plane with a rocket :D).
Sure it will take longer to make a Flash like that, but the quality would be amazing. Your definitely capable of front page, you just need to aim for it.

slowz responds:

ok!

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Mar 26, 2006
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