This is my second flash an its the beggining of a siries that i hope i can make. I used some of the tips that people gave me when they reviewed my first flash so that this one is (i hope) better. Any reviews that you give will be answerd.
-Enjoy
Not a bad start
^^Good Points^^
Once again, you have made some great fight scenes in this movie and I'm pretty impressed with how they turned out. The animations are very good and very smooth. The music also went along well with the ninja theme.
^^Needs Improving^^
You don't really give us much of a storyline, which would have made a lot more sense. Right now this seems like just another show of your skills in making fight scenes.
I disagree with less storyline, but I guess it needs to be explained, once I get my batting average up from these nooby submissions you will see ;)
Not Bad, Actually
+COMMENTS+:
The sound in this flash was pretty good, and went well with the rest of it. Also, the graphics and style weren't bad, either. You had a pre-laoder, too, which is a plus.
+IMPROVING+:
The aniamtion could be a little jerky at times. Also, I thought it was a little bit too short, and I don't really understand the ending. WHy he... him?
2/5
lol, hello again! Thanks for another review.
what does a man have ot do to get a 3/5 lol thanks for the review, I respond to all
-yodd
Nice.
I watched this one after your dancing-animation.
Good work!
It was fun to watch the sunlight wandering through the back of the room in quick-motion, looks like you made no break to record this ;-)
Hey, thanks for yet another review. Since I (yoddtacos) could not review being that this one is under his name. I went under his account because I wanted to reply to you. I believe there was one break but im not 100% sure on that one...
cool one
that was a cool legomation... and excellent audio too. since this one is only number 1, it looks like it could be a cool series. i look forward to seeing more.
Thnsx i hope everyone enjoys the rest of the siries. If worked it out into a 7 part story.
cool
This movie is good compared that its stopmotion. I like the music because its from Naruto.
3/5
Thnx. I thought the music best fitted the movie.