Good
But you need to learn to spell and use correct gramar.
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Johney, A.K, Samson, Mike and Andrei are attacking a military base on isle Palmito. To survive, they must all make a sacrifice. One of my fist movies.
ps. Pardon me for my bad spelling, I´m from Sweden.
Good
But you need to learn to spell and use correct gramar.
i have a question
i dont really like stuff like thism too much of it, but i have a question, on the news report it said ' they are driving a STOLEN car, and they are TERRORISTS' then, its says they havnt yet commited a crime, WTF?!
Missed the mark...
This flash had so much potential... but sadly... it missed the mark on nearly every level. Okay, first off.... the sound was rather lousy, and the graphics need some improvement. The thing is though, what you need to do is practice some more. You have a great idea here, and it did keep me watching till the end. I would highly reccomend you improve your skills then go back to this, and fix it up some more. The story needs to be a bit refined, but you have alot of promise and potential, don't waste it.
Also, I can understand that the language barrier is quite hard to get by, but why don't you have a friend help you with it? I mean, I'm not going to be down on this because of that, nor would I ever base my rating for a flash because of a language difference, but see if you can get some help with the translation. :)
Fix up the sounds a bit more, refine the textures and animations, and you'll have a much better flash. Good luck man!
I felt that was kinda lame, but a nice effort
It was very hard to follow and it lacked common sense in the story. It was lame in alot of respects. Though I will say it was a good attempt and the animation wasn't to horrible. Your story and scripting need work.
I voted 4
Very nice. Despite the grammar mistakes. And the sound of the guy from TV,.. WHy? That was an annoying sound.
Anyways, I liked it.