You need to improve on the placement of your visual effects and sounds, also you need to get an older voice actor for many reasons.
Too Many Lazer!
the sound needs to be improved althought the lazer sounds were ok but the lightsaber noise just sounds like nails on a blackboard and the jedi did sound like a kid which was odd (speaking of odd, Commander Oddball, Really? not, i don't know Commander Sha'ki or something like that?)
aside from that the only problems were too many lazers in the space fight and it was quite short but good none the less
I'm not going to comment on the Hail Fire/ Dawrf Spider Droid mix up and I just really LOVED it.Isn't it obvious people like AlphaX10 don't care for Star Wars and how hard people work on these movies. Keep up the AWSOME work.
2 out of 10-NerdBoy 66
the fact that you took the starwars we know and love and changed it made it suck the graphics were god awful and the sound suck milf tit i hated aand everyone else hated from the first two seconds to te last two seconds i was horrible
the fact that the jedi was voiced by what sounded to me like a child was offputting and the laser noises were really annoying