Amazing

This had to be the greatest flash in the world and anyone who says anything differently doesnt know humor. Good job.

lol

this was pretty funny, but the end was kinda random.

keep it up

meh

First half was really good and then it went down hill.

Ah, well...

I was getting into the poem and then the guy was shot. Too bad. It was interesting-before the neighbors feeding.

LOl

I kinda see something starting there but when you said you fd him poop, i thout that you were sick