Will we ever see part 3?
Do the part with the whores next!
*ahem*, now that I've regained control, it seem that you've made some steps of improvement to this, compared with the first part of your tale. I would say that there need to be more time spent upon the animation, but given that it was made in 2006, I'll assume that you're better now, since you're still animating.
The voices could use some work, but the Audio Portal and Forums can find you some talented voice actors, that can do your bidding for very reasonable fees (peanuts, porn, 5% of advert revenues), as it did sound a little mumbled and rushed. The analogies were straight out of right field, but did contain enough fun in there that I could smile at what was being done here.
With the blood at the end, I was glad that it was done in the "traditional" white, just like the movie, but the splatter could use a little more work, as I'm not sure that would be how it would look. Spray, perhaps coating the walls in a fine mist, but no long, thick streaks - these happen if the body hits the wall and drags down it, for example.
I look forward to seeing what else you are capable of.
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