PRETTY GOOD... BUT LACKING
PROS: The good things about this flash are the cartoon-like characters that were drawn fairly well using lots of detail. Another thing I like was your use of another kind of speaktopia voice.
CONS: I have a problem with the length of this flash. It ended quite abruptly which some might find funny in a random way. Over all it was quite short.
OVERALL: It had it's moments humor wise, but it was just way too short for my taste.