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Partum Quod Ruina; Mk II

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*Please Review with Constrcuctive Criticisms*
This is the updated version of the flash I submitted earlier, judge fairly as I have attempted to improve in the areas that were requested, sound and frame rate. As always can you please leave constructive comments when possible otherwise improvment will be impossible, thanks.

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Cool beans

This is artistic and creative. I like it alot. I rate Style on the quality of animation and Humor on the purpose/storyline, otherwise I would have given style a 9 and humor a 0. Keep practicing!



It was great

Cos i helped make it =D



sooper dooper film!!!!!

you can tell the person who made it is clever!! (i dont get it!!!)



Uh

That wasn't very good because it didn't really connect. Nice graphics, but next time make a story that is a little more linear rather than just flashes of drawings. The sound isn't interesting either, it's just noise really. I think you have potential, but remember a flash shouldn't just be graphics.


CorpusInvictus responds:

Thanks for the review, I'm taking everything you say into account. It is purposely disjointed and disconnecting (hence the Latin name), but I guess I haven't got the balance right yet. Thanks a lot.


Interesting

I liked it, but you might work on making the blood a bit more realistic.


CorpusInvictus responds:

Thanks, I will improve, this is the improved version of my second flash. I'm glad you liked it.

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2.04 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 18, 2006
4:46 PM EST
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