made me giggle...

I enjoyed it, I have to say. It already had the style and the music going for it. I thought it was cute, but a little too short. Maybe you could make a series of shorts like this and string them together into one flash...

*Blinks*

Ummmmm.. WTF was that...... The animation was ok, but other than that ummm, yea. I have already wasted to many words.

Not enough.

There really isn't anything to this cartoon. It's well-animated, but it's short and isn't at all funny. Work on making these longer and funnier, and you'd be doing just fine.

Umm...

I don't have too much to say about it, but umm...you coulda thought of some different sound effects, because most of them came from a little kid cartoon I'm guessing. The graphics...all pink? Well I know you know what your doing, but maybe this jsut wasn't the animation for front page. Better luck next time.

ok

make it a bit longer and put more fat black ladies (like Oprah) falling on people