Better gfx would help reel folk in
+++ I liked the use of white brushstrokes on a white bg early on (though you should maybe try using the mask tool).
+++ Liked the basic concept.
--- The transitions between audio segments took too long - I don't think there should have been as much silence as there was.
--- I also felt the visuals were a bit static and there wasn't enough visual interest basically. Specially at the end, where it was just the NG bg scaled.
Cool idea. Better gfx would help reel folk in though.