I THOUGHT THE ART RULED!
I like the simplistic designs for the characters. Very easy in a way, but with some nice articulation in a sense. Visually, the white and blue characters mesh quite well with the red background and sidewalk. I like the use of sound effects as they fit quite well. I would like to see more of a plot, like someone being pro-smoking and then the fight starting. That would be interesting.
I'm pretty sure if people keep making oddball jokes about old people they will all start dying off in large quanities daily, but before they die they will become a massive burden on society. Wait....
I like the idea behind it....
You're on the right track for finding humor. It's true though, if you make things funny, people will remember them. Keep up the good work.
Yeah.... that made little sense...if any.
I can see how it WOULD be funny...to some people....