I also make claymations

As a fellow claymation artist I will tell you what was good and bad

Good:
1.Movement in the animation
2.Theme
3.The preloader (I like it :))

Bad:
1.Fps (Add more)
2.Sound (Couldn't understand them most of the time)
3.It all went to fast for me to know what happened
4.You used blobs (Never use blobs, it is too Knox-like)

I look forward to seeing more work from you