you know it has to be done...
you need to finish it tyler. its tight tho- i like it a lot. the subtitles do subtract a little, but id say the creative call is yours on whether to make them sync up better or just cut them. same with the narration- your call. the voice is humorous, but it feels out-of-place when you watch it. maybe you could redo the narration in your normal voice? good luck with it, i hope to see it finished.