get a graphics tablet
to be fair, that was fuckin awful. i appriciate that ur massivly limited by a mouse, but instead of just submittin sum mess uv made, get a wacom , spend longer makin it, and watch the good films on this site. if u wer to watch sumfin like xombie, rebecca, salad fingers etc, ud know the standard and not stop til u honestly felt ud achieved it in sum capacity. try harder.