Nice
Nice animation Love the start
Author Comments
FIrst off you need flashplayer8: This is a story I've written, and don't mind the sponge bob voices, I didn't have a mic in time so i got creative, this is how my final piece came out. Please give helpful feedback, that I can progress in my next production. Thank you newgrounds, and enjoy my movie. Vote 10 and you are awesome.
Vote 5!!!!
This deserves all your 5's. VOTE 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Theres a lot of positive, so here is some negative
To be honest I'm not sure why this has been so well received, or received as well as it has anyway.
There was absolutely no story at all, and every scene was completely inconsistant with anything else in the movie. Even if that was the point, there has to be some reasoning or intent behind it, and there didn't seem to be any.
Using Spongebob voices is fine if you were to use them edited in such a way that you produce your own lines or dialogue, but there was no relevance to use them, and you essentially just did an interpretation of a Spongebob scene, and a pretty literal one at that.
If you had in fact written a story, then the odds that Spongebob dialogue would fit perfectly into what you had written is pretty slim. It seems more like you started with the dialogue and then came up with the rest after.
Basically, I'd suggest coming up with a more coherent story. Doing abstract or surrealistic work is a lot harder then people give it credit, because despite the seemingly non-sensical aspects, it has to work together and seem as a whole, otherwise it's essentially just random crap thrown together.
There something about this movie...
...something good. Can't quiet place my finger on it tho. Very creative. Good Job.
IT was funny
it was a cool fight scene, and then it was hilarious how they were arguing.
I also recognized the Cowboy Bebop music, and then the qoute at the end i was like "Isn't that Calvin and Hobbes?" and then it was.
and i was happy
