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this is good keep up the good work. althought it could have used more things like sound and a better background. still, it was good

excellent

An impressive effort! The graphics were very good. For this style of flash, the animation was well done. It was well thought out with each little pause and motion, which mean a great deal in this flash. Better than 99% of what is out there.

The soundtrack is well chosen. Of course there are no extra sounds, like voices, footsteps, etc. so that is difficult to judge; however this is appropriate to this flash since it adds to the dreamlike quality and introspective nature.

The story is an interesting one, though simple. Well thought out and well executed.

Work on the dynamics of motion of your images. Work on the density and complexity of the backgrounds. Work on adding more layers to your sound. It's really a matter of nuance. Take a look at "Nim's Winter Tale."

Superb!

Very interesting

It was simple yet mezmorizing at the same time. good work. With that said I have to say its just not for me im more of an action guy and this moved to slow for me. ill still give you a 3 though.

Good Movie, You need flash work.

Ok, So I liked this movie a lot. I think people should watch it. You just need to learn a little more flash and work on your animations some more. The direction and the way you got your message across was brilliant. Like an old silent film. I was conflicted, while the story and characters were great. The animation fell off at times and I just cringed. I hope you stick with it and get a little better at flash. You will produce great things in the future.

From one Artist to another...

I'd love to see you make a multi million dollar movie... It would be great, just like Tim Burton's movies...