Not good enough nowadays
Okay for second movie, sound kinda came out of nowhere and the text made it drag on, but at least its a decent storyline.
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I know theres a lot of text in it, believe me the second one is much better, I just have to build up the story so it makes sense. I actually made teh third one first back in the earliy days so some time, I'm going to have to remake the third one so it fits the story the way I want it to go, and this was my first actual series so don't flame we on it, let me know what you think.
Not terrible
It wasn't awful but it wasn't good either, as the other people have been saying there is alot that needs fixed about this flash. However it did have a pretty decent story. I await to see how you turn things around in the part 2.
Also spell Dimension correctly, the spelling error in the title I think bugged me more than anything else.
*snore* is it over yet?
OMFG this is one of the worst ever things that i watched and just as it got good it says "to be continued"!!!!!!!!!! this is a load of trash that should be destroyed!
it said theres was violence
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I need sound!!!!
First: I know theres some sound but not enough!!
its hard to understand whats going on without any sound, there were some scenes that just didnt make sense...
Second: with the text, some of it was way too fast and i had to scan bits of it, other parts were long and i got bored waiting for the next piece of text. if you could just use voice recordings it would be so much easier for everyone...