Very good
very good for ur first attempt....in fact a very good attempt in general,a supprisingly good flash and i loved the music and the sort of stop style animation when it was going through the seasons,Well done that class is paying off!!
Author Comments
This was created for a beginner's flash class and I consider it my first flash movie. Half of the techniques I used weren't covered in the class yet and may be done less than efficiently. I spent a bit of time on it and decided to submit it to newgrounds for constructive purposes. Hopefully all the experienced flash developers out there can leave some tips.
Synopsis: Basically a pretty short story of a caterpillar who falls in love. Hence the song theme aishtene motto featured in the anime tenjou tenge meaning love me more?
good
this is very good. the only things i would comments on i the credits are a little long, and as a continuity issue, if the buttfly emerges in spring, the tree maybe should have grown some leaves.I know thats just more work but it should look just as cool as when the leaves fell. great job..
Awesome
That was well done, the graphics and music matched very well. Some people can not get those 2 items to run very smoothly together. Hope to see more of your work in the future. Good Luck!!!
Very nice
It is obvoius that you have good control of flash and how to achieve the effects that you want. The thing that impresses me the most is that you do not linger on these effects, but instead quickly moves forward in your storytelling. In my opinion you have masterad one of the most important aspects of succesful animation - tempo.
Your graphics were well drawn, clean and simple. The music worked perfectly with the story and, again, the tempo of it. I for one hope to see much more of your work - great flash!
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Sweeet o.o
That's all I gotta say.